Gerome Doutrande
Rue Morgue
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Posted - 2007.06.30 17:16:00 -
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Good improvements compared to the first show. 
I'll make some comments in reverse order of the show:
- Rokh profile
Edited well and a nice feature overall. However, I wonder whether something like a "look at this ship" feature isn't better suited for say the print magazine. What you could do alternatively is a variation of the "pimp my ride/fix my flat" shows that are around: players send in their current setup with the intended use (and maybe some problems), and the fantastic ship expert discusses possible improvements (and maybe demonstrates them, e.g. shows cap usage before setup change and after).
- Tournament recruitment
This I liked best, I would have expected some short preview of the new rules though (but I guess you keep that for later). Nothing should be changed.
- 10 years CCP
Good coverage, good editing, good interviews, good overall length. Nicely done.
- Convention with Eve CCG
I could have used a "2 minute intro to the CCG" (if that is at all possible). As it was I found the feature to be too long.
- Non-politics news
I liked the "human interest" bit about the blog. Similar things could be reoccuring occasionally. Eve university was quite nice as well. Not so sure about the CCP/Goons bit, as it didn't seem to add anything new to the "discussion"; felt a bit like you wanted to put this in just to show that you are independent.
- Political news
This definitely needs some work. News of the first and second show feel disconnected. The coverage of the individual points was too long, and had too much text. Presentation was a little too "wannabe-BBC" for me, too forced. What I would suggest is to put in more and shorter segments (might be difficult because of sources), and to try and put them into a "storyline" (titan loss is part of the "big war" (with a big war logo yay)).
- Intro
I would like to have an overview of the show before the title sequence.
- Other
Teleprompter/whatever you used works nicely, sounds was better (can still be improved though), presenter desk looked a little bit better suited for conversation than in the first episode. I think the show was a couple of minutes longer than it should have been (I would have cut in the length of the news pieces, and the convention coverage).
Hope the feedback is useful.
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